The Picture on my profile is the inspiration for this poem and some other issues which have been dan...
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The Picture on my profile is the inspiration for this poem and some other issues which have been dancing in my mind.
मैं क्या क्या बन जाती
आसमां में उड़ते उड़ते
मैं बादल बन जाती
बादल से यूँ मैं तकती
मैं बिज़ली बन ज़ाती
ऊंचे पर्वत पर इठलाती
मैं नदियाँ बन जाती
बनदेवी के चरण पखारती
मैं झरना बन जाती
मलयगिरी को छूकर आती
मैं चंदन बन जाती
सूरज को देखने आती
मैं उषा बन जाती
निशा के चाँद को देखने जाती
मैं चकोर बन जाती
सागर में सीप से खेलती
मैं लहर बन जाती
कहीं अंधेरों में चमकती
मैं दीप बन आस जगाती
पर इससे ज्यादा मैं ये चाहती
निबिड़ अरण्य में पलकर बढ़ती
फिर लम्बी लकड़ी सी कटती
रंग, नूपुर से मैं सजती
सात सुरों की माला पहन
मैं श्याम की बांसुरी कहलाती
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Bunty

May be the childlike wonder is because of Keyaa
ahsaas jo khud hi bayan ho jaye vo aur bhi khubsoorat hote hain...
I was smiling long after ...that day happy memories of meeting an old friend
Thanks
keep coming
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Hiya Nupsie,

This one sure reflects the childlike romantic streak in you my dear!
Chaho jitna bhi tum apne ehsason ko chupana,
kahin na kahin se jhank kar ishara kar hi deti hai....
Was lovely meeting you and Keeya. Shall call you in a few hours....baki ke blogs kal padhungi.
Hugs!
Bunty.
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Sup
Thank you so much.
yes you are right its the elemets in us and the elements we become..
nice to see you here on my Hindi post am so happy
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Writer at heart
Thank you for the encouraging words.
I am glad you liked my poem, this one just flowed
sahajta se hi kuch sabd kagaz par utar aaye
keep coming
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Sounds like someone who wants to break free form flesh and be one with the elements.
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Dear Keyaa1,

Bahut hi sahajata Sey Aapney Mann key bhavon ko prakat kiya hai. Bahut hi sundar rachna hai.
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Red
Yes I also thought of those lines.
Yes the lines came in a mystic mood.
Am happy you liked this.
keep coming and would love to meet you one day...soon
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Nupur si mein sajti, saath suron ki mala pahen, main shyam ki bansuri kehlaati....sorry the hindi script doesn't work very well in comments. I shudave figgured that much.
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Red
Hey tell me which lines have you quoted?
am so happy you found this divine ...because it was a mystical moment which made me write this.
Am waiting for Bunty to come....
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These lines were simply divine Nupur,

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You have simply outdone yourself. Bunty will simply have to be my eyes when she meets with you soon.
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