Mein kya Ban Jaati

Jul 23 2008  | Views 258 |  Comments  (36)
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  keyaa1 posted 1 week ago

Bunty

May be the childlike wonder is because of Keyaa

ahsaas jo khud hi bayan ho jaye vo aur bhi khubsoorat hote hain...

I was smiling long after ...that day happy memories of meeting an old friend

Thanks

keep coming



  Buntys Banter posted 2 weeks ago

Hiya Nupsie,
This one sure reflects the childlike romantic streak in you my dear! 
Chaho jitna bhi tum apne ehsason ko chupana,
kahin na kahin se jhank kar ishara kar hi deti hai....

Was lovely meeting you and Keeya. Shall call you in a few hours....baki ke blogs kal padhungi.
Hugs!
Bunty.



  keyaa1 posted 2 weeks ago

Sup

Thank you so much.

yes you are right its the elemets in us and the elements we become..

nice to see you here on my Hindi post am so happy



  keyaa1 posted 2 weeks ago

Writer at heart

Thank you for the encouraging words.
I am glad you liked my poem, this one just flowed

sahajta se hi kuch sabd kagaz par utar aaye

keep coming



  supriyad posted 3 weeks ago

Sounds like someone who wants to break free form flesh and be one with the elements.



  writer at heart posted 3 weeks ago

Dear Keyaa1,

Bahut hi sahajata Sey Aapney Mann key bhavon ko prakat kiya hai. Bahut hi sundar rachna hai.



  keyaa1 posted 3 weeks ago

Red

Yes I also thought of those lines.
Yes the lines came in a mystic mood.
Am happy you liked this.

keep coming and would love to meet you one day...soon



  Red Strawberry posted 4 weeks ago

Nupur si mein sajti, saath suron ki mala pahen, main shyam ki bansuri kehlaati....sorry the hindi script doesn't work very well in comments. I shudave figgured that much.

 

 



  keyaa1 posted 4 weeks ago

Red

Hey tell me which lines have you quoted?

am so happy you found this divine ...because it was a mystical moment which made me write this.

Am waiting for Bunty to come....



  Red Strawberry posted 4 weeks ago

These lines were simply divine Nupur,

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You have simply outdone yourself. Bunty will simply have to be my eyes when she meets with you soon. 





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