gitz

Thanks for your kind words.I am so happy you liked what I wrote about Meera and Radha. Actaually those tthree lines came to me first and then the rest.

Yes the poem is straight from the heart.

keep coming

nupur
beautiful
bina

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! This is really beautiful, touching write keyaa

Nupur...

Hulki si udasi lekar

chalke se aansoo lekar

khoye se sapne lekar

ek chubhan chipani hai...

                       Khoobsoorat lines....Shaayad sabhi ke zeevan kuch na kuch nizi hota hai ya phir niji rakhna padta hai...Aur hona bhi chaahiye...!

Shootradhaar !

every time i read ur poem in hindi i love the way u use those words..........beautiful

mala ,chunari ,sargam ,diya ,chubhan,meera,radha..........preet suhagin ho kar bhi sanyasin hai .sanyasin hogi tabhi khud ko bhool doosare me ja samayegi .


lovely lines nupur .
keep it up

namita

 
ummm... errr.... welll.. uhmm.... 
Ok ... IT WAS LOVELY NUPS... i swear it was .... it wasn't that tuf for ma hindi ...

Loved the last 4 lines.................the mention abt meera and radha added the unique hue to the lovely poetry............keep writing...........love to read ur poems...........seems like straight from heart