Vish Shankar

Thank you for your encouraging words.
Yes this is very simple and am glad you enjoyed it.

Do keep coming

Nupur,
I dont normally appreciate poetry because its too complicated and abstract.. and Hindi is not my strength either.... but this was simple and therefore beautiful.. thoroughly enjoyed reading it
vish

Neha

Thanks ...

I was waiting for your comments.

I know....you know...so...

keep coming.

Binaji

Thank you for the appreciation. This just came along one day...

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Womanslove

Thankyou for your kind words.
I am glad you enjoyed my poem.

keep coming

Shootradhar

Thank you for your encouraging comments.

You are right..

Sbhi ki zindagi mein kuch na kuch niji hota hai.....kuch sirf apna sa...

Thank you

Simmu

Thank you so much for you lovely words. Yes your praise makes my poem look more beautiful
keep coming

Namita

Prret jab shradha ban jaati hai...to use Sanayasin hi bnana padta hai phir vah bhakti kahalati hai...
Aap ke shabdon ke humari Kavita ko kuch aise chho liya ki jaise lage mandir mein ek diya haule haule jal raha ho...

shukriya.

aati rahiyega

SUPERB NUPS!!!!

Love ya...
Neha

BL

Thank you for your nice words. Yes this is ver very easy..but my Hindi is very simple nothing tough about my Hindi.

I am happy you liked this one.

Hey did you read my story ...The Pupil and the Master I am sure you would like that.

Keep coming.