When Love becomes Devotion
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When Love becomes Devotion
कुछ हमारा भी
चाँदी के धागे लेकर
रातों के तारें लेकर
ओस के मोती लेकर
इक माला पिरोनी है
थोडी सी हँसी लेकर
पलकों की नमी लेकर
कली की हया लेकर
इक चुनरी सजानी है
बारिश की रिम झिम लेकर
शहनाई के सुर लेकर
बंसी की धुन लेकर
इक सरगम सुनानी है
सूरज की आंख लेकर
चन्दा के पंख लेकर
किरणों को संग लेकर
इक दिया सजाना है
हलकी सी उदासी लेकर
छलके से आंसू लेकर
खोये से सपने लेकर
इक चुभन छुपानी है
राधा की जिद लेकर
मीरा की टीस लेकर
अपनी प्रीत लेकर
इक ज़िंदगी जीनी है
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Vish Shankar
Thank you for your encouraging words.
Yes this is very simple and am glad you enjoyed it.
Do keep coming
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Nupur,
I dont normally appreciate poetry because its too complicated and abstract.. and Hindi is not my strength either.... but this was simple and therefore beautiful.. thoroughly enjoyed reading it
vish
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Neha
Thanks ...
I was waiting for your comments.
I know....you know...so...
keep coming.
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Binaji
Thank you for the appreciation. This just came along one day...
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Womanslove
Thankyou for your kind words.
I am glad you enjoyed my poem.
keep coming
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Shootradhar
Thank you for your encouraging comments.
You are right..
Sbhi ki zindagi mein kuch na kuch niji hota hai.....kuch sirf apna sa...
Thank you
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Simmu
Thank you so much for you lovely words. Yes your praise makes my poem look more beautiful
keep coming
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Namita
Prret jab shradha ban jaati hai...to use Sanayasin hi bnana padta hai phir vah bhakti kahalati hai...
Aap ke shabdon ke humari Kavita ko kuch aise chho liya ki jaise lage mandir mein ek diya haule haule jal raha ho...
shukriya.
aati rahiyega
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SUPERB NUPS!!!!
Love ya...
Neha
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BL
Thank you for your nice words. Yes this is ver very easy..but my Hindi is very simple nothing tough about my Hindi.
I am happy you liked this one.
Hey did you read my story ...The Pupil and the Master I am sure you would like that.
Keep coming.
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