hi noopur,
beautifully worded poem....
thodi si hasi lekar....
loved those four lines....
regards
sunder

bilingual

Thanks for coming on my blog even if you did not enjoy the poem. Translation would never bring the essence of what I wrote.

But will try to write it in English

Saranya

Thank you for your sweet words.
Hey my Hindi is simple ..I think too simple.

But yes feels good to be appreciated.

keep coming

Bahut acchha likha aapne!!!!

Well my friend I did NOT enjoy the poem.... LOL  Of course because I am challenged in Sanskirt...... For those of us undereducated.. how about a translation?

Wow....again a wonderful piece of writing!!! 
But ya, this time I got the meaning in the very first time...otherwise I always have to go thru ur poems twice...
Neways, very well written.....Keep writing!!!

Panchali di

Thank you so much for your wonderful words.
I was relly looking forward to your feedback on this one.
This was written ...as it came suddenly specialy the last paragraph which came ...

Thank you again am touched.

Keep coming

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Awwww, Nupur----

What have you done here !! Its truely touching dear . Beautiful words were like little pearly teardrops ,...... which almost gave an audio visual effect  :)))
Very beautiful dear 
Cheers,