This is for Neha...my friend a poem dedicated to you...you know and I know....from where this came.
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This is for Neha...my friend a poem dedicated to you...you know and I know....from where this came.
खामोश लफ्ज़
क्या खोजते हैं हम
रेत में और रात में
या फिर उस पार के चाँद में
किसी की क्यों तलाश है
कुछ हमारा था नही
कुछ हमारा है भी नही
फिर आंखों की ये कैसी प्यास है
लहरों की तरह आते है ख्वाब
कुछ पल, छिन वक्त से छीन लेने का
हमे क्यों इंतज़ार है
कुछ हलकी सी सरगम गुनगुनाने की
मन की ख्वाविश को सब्र कैसे सिखाये
दूर गगन में उड़ने के लिए पंख कहाँ से लाये
कुछ बूंदे बारिश की
या कुछ चंद कलियाँ चाँद की
झरती हुई सी हरसिंगार से
सुबह की मासूम ओस में
भीगी हुई सी दूब पर
चंद कदम हौले से चलकर
हम यूँ उनसे कुछ कह ले
या कुछ सुन ले
खामोशी महके
यूँ मन के आँगन में
या फिर बन कर इक दीप
उन अँधेरी रातों में चमके
जब चाँद भूल जाए आना
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Saranya
Thank you. I was sure you would love this one. keep coming.
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nupur,
kuchh khamosh alfaaz...ghungroo ki tarah bolte hua..bas ek bar unke aawaz hi talaashte hain..
beautiful one
reffy
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nupur tumhare lafjo ki khamoshiya kuchh aise bolati hai ki hamare pas shabd hi nahi bachte .u know while reading these lines i felt ......u have not written these with pen or to be more factual not typed ....bhavo ke pankh laga shabd aahista aahista ud aa baithe hai .............so deep so soft.....
chand ki kaliya yoo hi chatkati rahe .....harsingar yoo hi jharta rahe ......diye ki raushani ki umrdaraj ho
namita
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nupur
beautiful
bahut umdaa
bina
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Hi Nupur,


The pastels of friendship played quick strokes in the minds of the readers :)))
The effect is just amazing ....You are beautiful...God bless !!!
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Nupur....
" Khamoshi Mahke
uoon Man ke Angan Main
Yaa ban kar ek deep
chamke un andheri ratoon main
jab chaand bhool jaaye Aana "
Kalpnaon ki anoothi udaan....! Bahut hi khoobsoorat ye lines...!
Aapki kalam ko Shubh-kamnaon Sahit...!
Shootradhaar !
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hiyaa nups,
such beautiful words ..only someone who is there and has felt can write...u r a pearl
n neha..
u really deserve such a great poem...love ye both
love,
Ekta
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Grt poem.................I also love to dream and ............I could feel the pain for seeing dreams that are taking longer than usual to become reality...................well let's keep dreaming, and one day............dreams might just find a way to surprise you
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Nupur....
Wish i could hold your hands and hug you RIGHT NOW for this one....its only when you identify with each other completely...can you write about someone's pain...
I have no words to thank you....i feel special...really very special....
you know what I was just thinking...that pain comes only when you lose something...but this pain gives you some relations which last forever and ever in our hearts....i feel something that deep for you...
Thanks again..I am honoured....
Neha
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Wow....amazing....just too good!!!!
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