Khaamosh Lafz

May 13 2008  | Views 245 |  Comments  (20)
This is for Neha...my friend a poem dedicated to you...you know and I know....from where this came. ... Expand

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  keyaa1 posted 3 mnths ago

Saranya

Thank you. I was sure you would love this one. keep coming.



  reflector posted 3 mnths ago

nupur,

kuchh khamosh alfaaz...ghungroo ki tarah bolte hua..bas ek bar unke aawaz hi talaashte hain..
beautiful one

reffy



  namitasachan posted 3 mnths ago

nupur tumhare lafjo ki khamoshiya kuchh aise bolati hai ki hamare pas shabd hi nahi bachte .u know while reading these lines i felt ......u have not written these with pen or to be more factual not typed ....bhavo ke pankh laga shabd aahista aahista ud aa baithe hai .............so deep so soft.....

chand ki kaliya yoo hi chatkati rahe .....harsingar yoo hi jharta rahe ......diye ki raushani ki umrdaraj ho

namita



  binagupta posted 3 mnths ago

nupur
beautiful
bahut umdaa
bina



  Mrs Muffet posted 3 mnths ago

Hi Nupur,

The pastels of friendship played quick strokes in the minds of the readers  :)))
The effect is just amazing ....You are beautiful...God bless !!!



  shootradhar posted 3 mnths ago

Nupur....

" Khamoshi Mahke

uoon Man ke Angan Main

Yaa ban kar ek deep

chamke un andheri ratoon main

jab chaand bhool jaaye Aana "

Kalpnaon ki anoothi udaan....! Bahut hi khoobsoorat ye lines...!

Aapki kalam ko Shubh-kamnaon Sahit...!

Shootradhaar !



  ektabhandari posted 3 mnths ago

hiyaa nups,

such beautiful words ..only someone who is there and has felt can write...u r a pearl

n neha..
u really deserve such a great poem...love ye both

love,
Ekta



  gitz18 posted 3 mnths ago

Grt poem.................I also love to dream and ............I could feel the pain for seeing dreams that are taking longer than usual to become reality...................well let's keep dreaming, and one day............dreams might just find a way to surprise you



  neha_wagh posted 3 mnths ago

Nupur....

Wish i could hold your hands and hug you RIGHT NOW for this one....its only when you identify with each other completely...can you write about someone's pain...

I have no words to thank you....i feel special...really very special....

you know what I was just thinking...that pain comes only when you lose something...but this pain gives you some relations which last forever and ever in our hearts....i feel something that deep for you...

Thanks again..I am honoured....

Neha



  Saranya Patel posted 3 mnths ago

Wow....amazing....just too good!!!!





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