Caravans of Life

Apr 4 2008  | Views 333 |  Comments  (27)
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  Antonie posted 3 mnths ago

i never have the patience of reading poems... but then urs kept me hooked to it.... cos it was a bold camel reading it!!!!!!



  keyaa1 posted 4 mnths ago

Blizzard

Its always a pleasure to read your comments. Thank you so much. Yes these lines describe the feelings I wanted to say .
keep coming.



  blizzard posted 4 mnths ago


Nupur,
Awesome!!

To ask the reasons we may not know

When all you wanted was to share

Smiles and tears and a little care

And all you got was pain and jeer



  keyaa1 posted 4 mnths ago

Simmu

Was waiting for your comments. Yes this is all what life is. To each his/her own journey path we meet, we love, we leave...may be meet again or ne ver.. Keep coming



  simmu posted 4 mnths ago

beautiful description of the human emotion to b bonded and wanted as long as life breaths in.though there are enough explations on how to live life devoid emotions but it is not at all practical............u have put it down really well.the carvan of life.............each life with a different story.



  keyaa1 posted 4 mnths ago

Sampathji

Yes life is like a caavan...journey..
Thanks for your encouraging comments. This too is a journey isn't it , in the virtual world.



  keyaa1 posted 4 mnths ago

Sup

Aura ...has revealed more...somewhere the Fire temple ...and some river...that flows in the....valley of....... under a tsrnge sky...will tell you....



  supriyad posted 4 mnths ago

yea. Nupur. prob. like Aura.

 

We know.



  keyaa1 posted 4 mnths ago

LSR

Thanks for the kind ords. Yes life and caravans and camels ...all symbols..Glad you liked it



  keyaa1 posted 4 mnths ago

Rahulnachhiketa

Thanks for your encouraging words. yes may be I also wanted to write something differennt but some how at the time these were the only words which came.
welcome on my page.





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